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Some say that snow is sleep. I say
That snow is but the rest
Of clouds upon earth's surface laid
To soothe the forest's breast,
To calm the souls that linger there
Beneath an age of leaf
That hides within it's brindle flesh
Whole galaxies of seed.
Some say that snow is chill. I say
That snow is but a shawl
Draped over stones of silence,
That such silence shelter all.
And in such silence seal within
The brook beneath the glass,
That when the spring shall set it free
All dreams to sea shall pass.
Some say that snow is death. I say
That snow is but the prayer
Said when soul in winter's glade
Calls the body from its lair,
To stand within the last of light,
Becoming less than air,
To leave behind what came before
In the shadows dawn prepares.
In winter, I have beheld how silently in the moonlight the whole earth offers Thee prayer, clad in its white mantle of snow, sparkling like diamonds.
From the Akathist Hymn of Thanksgiving.
Posted by: RiverC at December 9, 2009 12:04 PMYour poem is like a gourmet meal in my mouth. I just keep on saying the lines because they feel and sound so beautiful in my mouth. I haven't encountered a poem that speaks so well in years.
Posted by: Gloria at December 9, 2009 12:45 PMThank you very much for those kind words.
And thanks as well for the Akathist link.
Posted by: vanderleun at December 9, 2009 12:52 PM"Snow is all right while it is snowing; it is like inebriation because it is very pleasing when it is coming, but very unpleasing when it is going."
Ogden Nash
Posted by: McKiernan at December 9, 2009 1:05 PMMr. V, You have outdone yourself. You have certainly outdone he who would be our global shepherd and bard unto death and destruction, killing him softly with snowflakes.
Lovely on many levels.
Posted by: Webutante at December 9, 2009 1:21 PMDeep Freeze
A memory of long ago of flat Fens and deep snow;
The weeping willow bent low
And Robin Redbreast, desperate,
Accepting remnants from my Jubilee plate.
So still, so clear, so crisp, so clean;
A pure idyllic winter scene.
With almost sixty years between
That day and now, that memory returns intact;
Untouched, as this days's frozen tract.
And on this crystal winter day
Along the Sussex South Downs Way;
The Fens and childhood far away,
All that is and was, between that time and now:
Encapsulated and unchanged beneath the pristine snow.
FP
(1990).
Thank you Frank,very evocative.
Posted by: vanderleun at December 9, 2009 3:13 PMMiles better than Al Gore.... Miles.... But I damn with feint praise.
It's very good. It captures some of my thoughts and feelings of snow.
Posted by: Gray at December 9, 2009 3:18 PMThat is an extraordinary poem. The second stanza is sheer brilliance. I have to memorize it. I just do.
Posted by: Cobb at December 9, 2009 3:24 PMI was inspired to write my very own (cross posted from Neoneocon):
Tree marrow, tree marrow and tree marrow
Creeps in this warming place from farce to arse to the last hockey stick of Recorded temp.
And all our carbon footprints have lighted capitalists the way to cap ‘n’ trade.
Out! Out! Fossil fuels!
Life is but a warming hazard, a poor redneck who buys and wastes his carbon credits at Walmart.
‘Tis a tale told by the Algore.
Full of fraud and worry
Benefitting no one.
Snow on snow on snow? Read this earlier today - stopped me dead in my tracks on a fully engaged day, and took me to still places in my heart and mind. A lovely respite, thank you. Damn, you're good.
Posted by: Jan B at December 9, 2009 7:03 PMWell, I'll be. I resisted the urge to scroll down and see who wrote this lovely poem and was rewarded by seeing it was all you. Did the photo inspire the poem? If not, it was an inspired choice of illustration.
Posted by: Gypsy at December 9, 2009 10:47 PMNo I took the photo last year in Portland Maine. It was something I found today looking about for an illustration. I manipulated it a bit to be more in line with the tone of the poem.
Posted by: vanderleun at December 9, 2009 11:19 PM
Something about a poem when the last line manages that final tweak to the heart . . .
My. My.
Posted by: Cathy at December 10, 2009 9:06 AMUm - what is the figure supposed to be? Man After She Finally Says 'No, I Don't Like You In That Way'?
Posted by: Mikey NTH at December 10, 2009 3:56 PMBeautiful, Gerard.
Have you ever considered recording some of your poems? I'd be curious to compare what I hear and what you intended. On this one, I'm trying to figure how long to pause, if at all, after the period on the first line of each stanza.
Posted by: Cris at December 14, 2010 8:53 PM@Cris
Speaking strictly as a reader, I get the most satisfaction giving it a strictly Shakespearian pause; a tiny one that doesn't mess with the meter. This is a poem to be set to music. A big, dramatic pause kind of does for the poem what bad singers invariably do to "Somewhere Over the Rainbow."
Sorry - just read what I wrote, and I sound like I've got a Pontificate Rod shoved right up my nether region. Apologies.
@Gerard
Bravo. Love this one.
Posted by: Cameron at December 14, 2010 11:24 PMHaunting, thought provoking and written beautifully. Thank you! You are a man of many talents.
Posted by: Cilla Mitchell, Galveston Texas at December 15, 2010 4:49 AMI love this poem the most.
Posted by: Jewel at January 16, 2012 7:13 PMI say It's beginnin' to look a lot like Fimbulwinter.
Posted by: Drang at January 17, 2012 1:10 AMMr. V, that verse is rare, exceptional. It certainly paused my little world. My first thought was which poet of rank wrote this? Turns out it was you. All the better.
This being my first visit I tremble to think what you make of my man Ron Paul. Here goes...
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