That's fine, fine writing.
Posted by Rob De Witt at August 23, 2012 9:59 AMBreathtaking.
JWM
Posted by jwm at August 23, 2012 5:10 PMI feel like a dope commenting "that's a good one!" every time you post one of these, but that's a good one!
You do well in that meter. Most of your best are in that--like the one about grain, with the Sumerian marked tablets imagery (I really liked that one).
I love the picture of the leopard: I've come face-to-face with that look and I only prevailed by letting the beast I keep off the leash I keep.
Really good; I'm gonna read it again.
Posted by Gray at August 23, 2012 10:48 PMCome at me, bro.
Heh....
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